First poem I have ever willingly let people read

*all works are lm original. PLEASE DO NOT STEAL MY WORDS!!

Little dingy things in the cememetry Reign.
Vying for my pain.
Make me go insane.

My whole life folding
Moving, bleeding.
Burning breaking.
Whole being shaking.

Clank and clatter
Thoughts are scattered.

All alone in this place.
Endless winding chase.

Flames engulf the last of me
So hear my screeching
Dying plea

There is no relief so just try and grieve
It won't get better never never
The anguish evolves but never dissolves.

Note: I will be sending this out for publication this week to a couple of different places. :)
Please let me know your thoughts
Thanks
Lm

Please excuse any misspellings/typos ect ect...